I love poetry. I think its great with all the rymeing its so cool. here i will give you a exampale summers trees leaves lay on your knees. Now thats cool. i THINK THAT WAS SO VERY COOL. How dose it make you feel.
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Snowing
Winter is here
Snowflakes fall on the ground
Every white snowflake is unique
Solemn snow
Oops my last line is 3 syllables not 2 How about instead:
Snowing
Winter is here
Snowflakes on the ground
Every white snowflake is unique
Peaceful
Snowflakes
Cold snow outside
Snowflakes on the cold ground
I will play in the snow today
Tired out
Snowman
Building with cheer
With a hat and a pipe
Then add the buttons and broomstick
It's great
Winter
We shovel snow
I will make a snowman
I will bundle up for outside
Cold hands
Its Snow
Snow is so fun
You can build an igloo
You can through snowballs very hard
Swon ROCKS!!!!!!!!
Your third line is only 5 syllables Snoopy 100!!! How about Cold snowflakes on the ground!!!!!
Thank you Snoopy30 for fixing my poem!
Snowman
A carrot nose
Two buttons for the eyes
A scarf to wrap aroud it's neck
Cold hands
Snowball
Cold snowball fights
You can make a snowman
Warm coco after all is done
Cozy
oops the last line in my first poem has 3 syllables ...
Warn out
i cant relly think of one
I love poetry. I think its great with all the rymeing its so cool. here i will give you a exampale summers trees leaves lay on your knees. Now thats cool. i THINK THAT WAS SO VERY COOL. How dose it make you feel.
Snowflake
falling down !WOW!
differant shapes and sizes
falling down on the ground !CUTE!
pretty
Christmas
brings joy and cheer.
for pepole all around.
you can get presants from pepole
chrismas!!!
Winter
Snowball fights
Sleding down a hill
You can slip on ice outside
Is fun
Snowing
Winter is here
Snowflakes fall to the ground
All the snowflakes are different
Awesome!!!!!
Chrismas,
I love christmas,
everyone likes christmas,
I love the holidays like you,
christmas
winter
has lots of snow
with solemn snowflakes
all of the snowflakes all fall down
winter
winter was once here i guess its time for a new year as it gets you see children loughting and play time for a new year
SNOW
I want some more
You can make slushys to
It is very fun to play in
SNOW
Also I spelt swon but I mean Snow.
sorry!! Snoopy 32 I like your poem on the snowman. It is AWESOME:)
winter
i love winter
winter is so aswome
winter is such a great season
winter
Outside
Not very warm
You can play games inside
Snow is very fun to play in
Outside
Snow is only 1 syllable how about fun snow SORRY!!!!!!
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